2010-04-05 [Chel.]: Interesting concept! I'm not very good at drawing machines myself either... too inorganic.

Suggestions... The feet things don't look like they are on the same plane as the cockpit. As in, they seem drawn from the side where the cockpit is at an angle.

2010-04-05 [Daisy_Sandybanks]: Yeah, I'm not very good at perspective or angles either. That's definitely something that I have to put more work in to.
I'll try and fix it up a bit, thanks. :)

2010-04-05 [NOOOPE]: What Chel said. And the farthest windshield seems to be bubbling out a bit. Beside that, it's super cool! The plane's body itself is very well rendered.

What's the story behind this?

2010-04-05 [Daisy_Sandybanks]: I lurk around the www.conceptart.com forum a lot, and they have a "Daily Sketch Group" section where someone posts a topic each day or so and people sketch out that idea.

The idea behind this was "Multi-use Personal Flying Craft has Awesome Tri-Color Paint Job".
I've yet to color it in (or even ink it, for that matter), obviously.

Some of the topics that they post are really awesome. It's great seeing what people come up with each day, too. :)

2010-04-07 [Daisy_Sandybanks]: New image is up!

2010-04-07 [Chel.]: I love how you handled the media. It seems very natural and loose. However, the way the bridge ends to starkly is a bit...odd. Even a more gradual fade out might be better?

2010-04-07 [NOOOPE]: I really like it! It reminds me of kid's books illustrations! It's got a lot of character. Very cool.

2010-04-07 [Aeolynn]: it looks good!I don't really know what else to say, I have a hard time looking over non biological or fantasy drawings :\

2010-04-16 [Daisy_Sandybanks]: New Image! :)

2010-04-19 [NOOOPE]: I almost like the black and white more... but only 'cause I'm normally and anti-color whore. I think with the colored one, some strong highlights on the ribbon would make it more ribbony, but besides that, I like the vibrancy of the colors a lot.

2010-04-19 [Chel.]: Depending on the tattoo size...the lettering might be hard to read. It's just a bit too "chunky".

2010-04-19 [Keylla]: I agree with [Chel.] about the lettering. I love the vibrancy of the colors though :D (Thank you [Chel.])

2010-04-19 [Chel.]: "vibrancy" :3